Rj#11 11/9/11
Dear Ms. Zrihen I am done reading the book The Lottery By: .................................. .
I think significance of this short story is how somebody wins the lottery and what and what he does with it.
I picked this passage because the title seemed interesting I mean the lottery is like a cool name for title I makes the story seem interesting.
The two before reading strategies I used before reading the book was that I looked for text features like for pictures bold words etc. I also thought about hat the book would be like. The two during reading strategies I used was that I asked myself questions about the book like does the title have to do anything with the book yet. I also reread important paragraphs. The two after reading strategies I used was that I reread important parts in the book. I also looked back in the short story for more details.
Genera:Fiction
Characters:Mr.summers, Ms.summers, Ms. hutchinson,Dunbar,Adams Mr. hutchinson. Joe, Allen, Time, Old man warner, MR. Graves.
Setting: neighborhood, sunny,
Tone: Happy
Mood:good
Moral: how to work together
Point of view: good
Pattern of organization: cause and effect
authors purpose: to entertain
Authors perspective:objective bias
I rate this short story a SIX out of TEN because there were some mistakes that I caught in the Short Story.
Your student MAOR SHAALTIEL.
Dear Maor,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed how you put a lot of the things from the rubric and I think you should keep doing that. What is the genre? Fiction is not the complete genre it also has to be like a mystery or realistic fiction things like that. What is the conflict? What were some of the mistakes it had in the short story? My advice would be to make it longer.
Sincerely,
Tamar Bouskila